Tuesday, November 22, 2016

Lauren and Nick: D-Day Normandy

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First, write about something well done.  What did you learn from this group?  What part of the Presentation seemed the best?  Be specific, and use a specific example from the Presentation and your notes.

Second, offer constructive criticism that would help this group. What might have been more clear?  What part of the Presentation seemed the least polished?  Be specific.

18 comments:

  1. The information was very good. You could tell the presenters really did their research. The only thing I would change is that the slides were really information packed and it was hard to get all of the information absorbed.

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  2. Presentation was very good, lots of valuable information. Only thing I might have changed was to refer to the hand out a little more. Very good presentation overall though!

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  3. Good Job Stating your thesis at the beginning. Both you guys used "um" and "uh" a lot. Also another thing I noticed was the slides had a lot of information on them. Overall, you guys knew your topic and answered all the questions right. Awesome!

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  4. Excellent job on giving a lot of information and was presented. Maybe more info on the other fronts other than Omaha

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  5. You guys gave an excellent walk-through of the subject's preliminaries before approaching the main topic.

    You guys started to kind of read the slides, though, rather than expanding on the information given on said slides.

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  6. You guys had a good thesis and you were both very well spoke. You guys also gave a lot of background information about the beach itself and was a very good presentation. Maybe you cold of split the slides up more even.

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  7. The presenters demonstrated a mastery of the information, and had relevant audio/video features as well. The only suggestion I could make would be to have covered more information on the aftermath and affects of the operation on the war overall.

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  8. You were one of the few groups that actually made a handout, which had a lot of details on it, that is a good thing. You kind of got bogged down with the statistics of it and talked about one of your main points at the end.

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  9. Very good job with the presentation, both seemed very calm and know exactly what you are talking about.
    Maybe a couple more bullet points on your first couple slides so people can keep up.

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  10. Your presentation was very informational and really went into depth on the topic, and it was evident that you did good research and knew what you were talking about. If I had to give a negative it would be that some slides had too much writing on them.

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  11. The first section 'context' was short and precise in what information we needed, very well put together.

    Room for improvement: Having a hard time finding something to improve, but one word of advice I would give is that the slides contained admittedly a bit too much information (too much info in an informative presentation, go figure.)

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  12. I liked the handouts, they are something the audience can refer to throughout the presentation. One thing that could have been improved was that the slides had too much writing in my opinion.

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  13. Very informational going into depth on the topic which was good. In your presentation I notice more words then figures. provide less information. You two seemed very drain when presenting today. Were you nervous? I understand if you were. Have confidence to speak to the audience.

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  14. Your handout was very informational and you explained the invasion, battles, and their effect on the war. You read from the slides at some points but overall I have no major critiques. Great job!

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  15. Very informational. Nice use of handout to keep the audience centered on your topic.
    Only criticism : Reading off slides and having the slides contain too much information.

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  16. The flow of the presentation went well, but reading word for word was a downfall.

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  17. I thought you guys did a very good job of presenting. You displayed good information in the right amount of time. I would only add maybe a few more pictures to capture the audience a little more.

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  18. The presentation was very informative and the handout was helpful. A few more pictures would have been helpful to illustrate the event.

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