Thursday, November 17, 2016

Grant and Joe: Twin Towers in New York City

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20 comments:

  1. I liked your presentation and that you talked about the design and importance of the buildings, as most people really only know of them for the 9/11 attacks. One thing is that I wish the presentation was longer, maybe used a video or something.

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  2. They did a great job of presenting the information. They also did a good job of portraying their opinions.

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  3. This presentation was very well structured, and clear points were given, making for an easy to follow and understand experience. Additional supplemental knowledge would have benefited in order to better answer any questions given.

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  4. I liked how comfortable you both were talking and gave a lot of great information about how this event effected the market before and after. My only critique would be maybe a little more information about the actual attack.

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  5. I liked how you showed the towers as being at the center of it all; having people from many other countries there. Use pictures, if possible, instead of reading straight from the slides.

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  6. I liked that you had a lot of content that really helped me learn more about the twin towers. One thing I would change is that there were a lot of words on the slides, otherwise the presentation was good

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  7. Good job presenting the information, it was very factual and had good precise points and was easy to follow. A recommendation would be to use more pictures or maybe a video to make it more interesting.

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  8. one of the weaker points the presentation was the Q&A portion of it. make sure to research multiple angles of the topic to avoid being stumped. You guys pack a lot of information in a small amount of time which was good as well as having a good flow of information.

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  9. You guys gave a clear outline of reasons why it is famous, which is something almost all of the presentations lacked.

    I think that you guys could engage the audience in a more personal way. Finding a way to relate facts to us.

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  10. One thing i would change is to speak more rather than reading the slides

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  11. I liked how the economic impact of 9/11 was included, I thought it was really interesting. One thing I thought could have been added was information about the towers in it's earlier days.

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  12. GREAT use of giving iconic reasons to why you believed your topic was/is important. Good, relevant info shared. Good visuals.
    criticism : the info you shared was great, but share a little more and maybe include how the towers are respected today.

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  13. Good information presented, but I felt like you guys read of the power point more than any thing.

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  14. I enjoyed how you were able to talk about the symbolic meaning of the towers and what they represented instead of focusing solely on 9/11 like most people do.

    Presentation was a bit short, could of had a bit more.

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  15. I liked how you guys had your main reasons on the first slide then later went back and elaborated on each point. one thing i think could have went better was a video to take up some time and grab our attention more

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  16. You guys explained iconic points very well, and I liked how you explained the effects of 9/11 on the US economy and society. There was relative information i felt you left out however.

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  17. Good keypoints about explaining why the twin towers were iconic. I've learned a lot since I never really traveled. your focus and reasons were good

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  18. I could feel some patriotism resonating from the verbal aspect of the presentation, but I would like to know more about the legacy like the comments given afterward. A picture of the new building and maybe the disaster would have been more effective.

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  19. this is one of the most touchiest subjects in American history and you guys killed it. I thin you could have included a little more about the actual attack itself but you did a great job of including everything about the towers

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  20. Very informative presentation I liked how you referred to it as a symbol of American prosperity. I didn't know there was many different corporations within the towers. I would have liked to seen more info on the memorials they created after the attacks.

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