tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4837396405565079931.post6444670595344682029..comments2016-12-06T09:38:16.053-08:00Comments on Writing to Learn & Share in English 1110: JD adn Vic: Jesse OwensMike Lohrehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05832313501793243606noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4837396405565079931.post-26231266031326388922016-11-21T14:11:35.403-08:002016-11-21T14:11:35.403-08:00I thought it was very interesting that he went to ...I thought it was very interesting that he went to Ohio State. J.D had a lot of great information on Owens success. Vik also had great information on the background of his life. <br /><br />Instead of one person reading one slide, maybe doing the slides together. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00995869343623162208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4837396405565079931.post-81597333486707855342016-11-17T11:44:28.483-08:002016-11-17T11:44:28.483-08:00I should have known that Owens was from OSU, but I...I should have known that Owens was from OSU, but I didn't, so I enjoyed learning that part. I would have liked more information on Hitler after Owens caused such an event in Germany.Austin Craighttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00958409624223719127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4837396405565079931.post-39144885172606169262016-11-17T10:16:48.818-08:002016-11-17T10:16:48.818-08:00Good, organized thesis. Good visuals on some slide...Good, organized thesis. Good visuals on some slides, but not all. <br />JD : good flow in speaking. very informative info shared. nice tone. <br />Vik : nice emotional story-telling to make your info more entertaining. Nice job expounding on your info given on the PowerPoint. raise voice volume a tad.<br />criticism : bigger font on slidesPaige Riebelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05354985065619578694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4837396405565079931.post-8337495587226531872016-11-17T09:58:59.433-08:002016-11-17T09:58:59.433-08:00I think that you guys did a great job integrating ...I think that you guys did a great job integrating facts into your presentation and making it interesting. <br /><br />I think that your slides were a little too thick -- too much information for me to read. Matthew Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10240785146986341297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4837396405565079931.post-28237935877398839752016-11-17T07:27:16.696-08:002016-11-17T07:27:16.696-08:00Your presentation was excellent and you appeared v...Your presentation was excellent and you appeared very confident. I liked how you brought the issue of racism between Germany and the United states and how he was treated differently in each setting. The only criticism I have is that some of your text on the progress for blacks slide was in different sizes and difficult to read but overall it was very well put together. Amanda Giffordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11428795358055113150noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4837396405565079931.post-69760323988579952762016-11-16T19:28:30.440-08:002016-11-16T19:28:30.440-08:00You guys did a great job on showing and explaining...You guys did a great job on showing and explaining jesse's cultural impact and how eye opening it is today. An improvement to your presentation would to make your slides more balanced content wise and visually appealing to your audience.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17309363527044533711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4837396405565079931.post-10000293860901892052016-11-16T17:30:08.498-08:002016-11-16T17:30:08.498-08:00Unless I am remembering incorrectly your presentat...Unless I am remembering incorrectly your presentation had a fairly constant color scheme throughout, it worked well. The text size on the slides was a little small.Dathan Lyonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06849241602966837670noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4837396405565079931.post-52608880230995126922016-11-16T15:10:10.368-08:002016-11-16T15:10:10.368-08:00Both of you did an amazing job speaking during the...Both of you did an amazing job speaking during the presentation, you really knew what you were doing and knew your information. Very good, the only thing I would improve upon is a few more pictures. :)Kirsten Osbornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14964459902936098807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4837396405565079931.post-43457377621300293132016-11-16T15:07:32.161-08:002016-11-16T15:07:32.161-08:00I thought you guys did a great job of presenting t...I thought you guys did a great job of presenting the information overall. The only thing I would add is more visual aids in the presentation to grasp the reader's attention.Joe Campanellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01928103963820679854noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4837396405565079931.post-73915506028965938302016-11-15T19:06:17.628-08:002016-11-15T19:06:17.628-08:00The information was very interesting and you made ...The information was very interesting and you made it easy to follow. The only criticism I have is that the specific events could have been made clearer.Regan Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00203700500245646345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4837396405565079931.post-30699846893305356752016-11-15T17:24:59.373-08:002016-11-15T17:24:59.373-08:00first off fantastic job. everyone in that room cou...first off fantastic job. everyone in that room could tell that you had practiced your presentation and because of that it sounded very smooth, almost as if you were taking part in normal conversation. one thing I will say though is maybe add a few more pictures of Jesse, and don't read off of your slides as much. all in all fantastic performance Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01373946420988529363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4837396405565079931.post-31556721705168971582016-11-15T15:15:12.370-08:002016-11-15T15:15:12.370-08:00I liked the way you used images on some of your sl...I liked the way you used images on some of your slides, most of those you used were important and impactful to your presentation. However I think they could've been more spread out, as some slides were completely without images.Phillip Wolfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11026056731492877005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4837396405565079931.post-62104851110999532772016-11-15T15:05:46.355-08:002016-11-15T15:05:46.355-08:00You guys did an excellent job with explaining as t...You guys did an excellent job with explaining as to why Jesse Owens was such an important athlete for black society. One thing that could have been better was the slides having the consistent style instead of going between one slide full of info and the other slides having the right amount of info and images.Hunter Bayerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10073599216980815808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4837396405565079931.post-1687080305168262552016-11-15T10:35:56.659-08:002016-11-15T10:35:56.659-08:00roast usroast ushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00356270711802690088noreply@blogger.com